Friday, 6 June 2014


Recount: A time I was Successful

WALT: Retell of a past experience 
WILF: Audience has all the information needed


At least the  suns out this Saturday. My hockey uniform is cold. 

It's Kaikohe Christian School verse Ohaeawai and this is our first game against them.

The  game is going to start. I got into my position. Ohaeawai had the ball.

I got the ball and passed it to my friend. My friend passed it back to me. I ran the ball up and whacked the ball into the goal. The goalie kicked the ball back out. The whistle blew, the game is over!





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